They've improved in the new Director's Cut with layout, but Kris evidently didn't improve Jafira's story, which many people wished to know about. Albeit not adding more story in the re-release, maybe we can expect more in the sequel. The stories look nicer, but still follow the less popular, controversial script form.
Only half my stories are in script form, I'm not sure which I favor more so I keep switching between the two types. As for Jafira's story the conversation at the end was a new ending- In the original his home was burnt down and he just left. The new ending explains why he returned and later met Koragus and Veltraz years later.
As for a sequal to Jafira's story I wouldn't count on it Jafira's story itself was kind of a fluke, where I was exceptionally creative that night and don't think I could create a decent sequel.
I think jafira's stories are the greatest so full of humor comedies.
Dragons fly by night their wings beat like a thousand drums while their souls are endless and frozen in time. Their souls burn like a raging fire within the endless night that shall never see the light of day.